Legal advice on custom license

Hello,
I created a custom license called the Neo-MIT-License (basically the MIT license with a couple of differences). The website link is
https://ndrewxie.github.io/Neo-MIT-License/
Could anybody please give me some pointers or references (pun intended) on how to remove loopholes, improve formatting and grammar, etc?
Thanks,
ndrewxie
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The license has very little in common with the MIT license. In text structure it's closer to the BSD license, to boot. Calling it "Neo-MIT" makes as much sense as writing an EULA and calling it GPL 4.0.

Conditions 1, 2, 3, and 4 are basically equivalent to CC BY-NC-SA.
The exception on condition 3 is redundant. An author is always able to make one-off licenses for individual prospective licensees.
Condition 4 is probably redundant. Condition 1 already requires that derivative works include the license, which by my interpretation means that derivative works must be licensed under the same license.
Finally, I don't really see the point of condition 5. Let's say that A licenses C to B, and B does use C to break the law, and this fact comes to light. Now C goes to jail, or pays a fine, whatever. What's A going to do? Sue C? What would be the point of that?
I have the same question as the thread owner had. Anyone can help?
ndrewxie wrote:
Could anybody please give me some pointers or references (pun intended) on how to remove loopholes, improve formatting and grammar, etc?

Hire a lawyer or team of lawyers.

A license is a legal contract/document.
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